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Garen Marie's avatar

Oh this is so interesting, especially when I compare it to the more recent version you published. I remember that description of bible-black hair which I absolutely love, and now I can see Death so clearly. I'm looking forward to reading more!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

That makes me very happy! Especially as I was hoping people would enjoy comparing the two versions. She's much more quirky and upbeat in this version. I'm really glad you're liking it!

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Nichole M Willden's avatar

I love this story already!!! I’m so excited to be a subscriber and be reading a story I love! 💗

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Yay! Thank you so much for subscribing, and I am really, really happy you are enjoying the story. It’s also quite good that you’re reading this first version first. The serial is the longer, final version, which is a lot deeper. I think you will definitely understand and like the little twist (I think that’s episode 9 if I recall). The final version though has a different take so you don’t need to worry about spoilers in this version…

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